Sunday, May 20, 2018

Abstract Tones

It might be the whiskey
Or it might be the mood
Here you come dancing
Across my mind's stage
Bringing back those complications
I still don't understand


Life was pretty simple
Until you drew me in
 The abstract tones
Of your soul
Then turned me inside out
I still don't understand


It was probably me
Or maybe not
Time says
I will never know for sure
Those abstract tones
Left a mark
I carry to this day


17 comments:

  1. It's so hard to follow when the abstract comes up... and a painful memory where cause and causality blur...

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  2. Oh to bring back the simple life and leave the abstract behind....

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  3. Those memories can run pretty deep, can't they? Well said.

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  4. Some people dance in and dance out. Some I can't follow.

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  5. Ah, reflecting on those former relationships and wondering what might have been....not always easy!

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  6. Very nicely put together - a cool retrospective with just a touch of blistering. We women often appear in abstract tones only because of our different wavelengths

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  7. Good to have memories like those. Needing reflection. Thanks for dropping by my Sunday Standard today Robert

    much love...

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  8. Now and again my first love dances across my mind, stirring memories and wondering's...
    I agree with TTT, we think differently...
    Anna :o]

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  9. Sometimes, it is the mood that sets the mind to wandering. Or perhaps it is a song that sets the heart to dancing.

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  10. Love it!!! You had me at:

    'It might be the whiskey
    Or it might be the mood
    Here you come dancing
    Across my mind's stage'

    Been there - done that - bought the T-shirt. Well, haven't we all? ~ Smiles -

    A fantastic - truly relatable - piece of writing!

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  11. I know that looking back and wondering..........as ZQ says, it is likely both...........

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  12. I am sure we all store those little memories somewhere of the liaisons which came to nothing but still nudge us in the ribs now and then but keep from our partner.

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  13. This is beautifully emotive. In life we gather much experience and wisdom.. and sometimes learn that it was all worth it in the end 💖

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  14. abstract tones of your soul... love that.

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  15. Ah yes, there are those who do that! You've captured the experience very well.

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